Wow, this was an excellent poem! I have also forgotten how well you wrote. It's been a really long time since we've talked, and an even longer time since I've read your poems. Well done on this one. That last verse was really intense.

I love the imagery created in this poem. It's so vivid, as if being displayed right before me. Beautiful vocabulary used, too.

Excellently penned.

Thanks for the comment. It is a true poem. It's about my 'father' that I haven't seen in almost two years.

I love this poem. The words put so much emotion into it. Very nice job. :]

OoOoOoOoO another good poem u are very good at poetry..o yea wat does palpitations means? lol im not big on vocab....the whole poem was yet again awsome but tht word..*cant say it* cant figure it out lol owells

My one comment for the moment is that, to me, "crazy in love" didn't seem to fit the overall delicacy of your other vocabulary. The sentiment works there, but I'd consider perhaps substituting "crazy" with a softer word.

What a great poem. You really get the reader into the poem. And as the others have mentioned, you have an amazing way of using words.
Great job.

I really love your poems there worded so wonderfully, I wish I had a larger vocabulary to make poems like yours but of course your will always be better because your poems are soo good good job loved it.

This one is beautiful! i loved it. that is how i feel sometimes 5/5

You used alliteration wonderfully in this write. I have the same comments on this poem as I did for your other. Sorry, I'm going to sound repetitive....
Beautiful language...though some words I would consider to be overused...
Keep writing young lady!!

You are honestly a very descriptive writer and in a pretty high level. Because of that, I think you should start experimenting with different styles, modern free-styles and debatable topics in real life.

Beautifully penned, the usage of words is wonferful.Nice poem.5/5

chavii.

This is a beautifully written poem you have here. It has been a long time since I have read your work and I forgot how talented you are. You write so descriptively with such a large vocabulary. It makes a poem much easier to visualize and you really can connect with the writer while reading it that way. Excellent write.

Tammie

To be in love, its such a magical thing isnt it? 5?5

Once again beautifully penned.
& once again the description is flawless.
I've noticed while reading thats something you tend to achieve.
& it's something unusual for someone at the age of 14.
It makes me smile. :]
I love it. :]

Great Job.

Thats mighty deep of you! The title captures the essence of the meaning and the content is very embracing of the topic at hand. I really like this one.

I don't understand why this isn't a 5.0 ... Downvoters suck. Anyways .. You did an excellent job! For only 14 you write beautifully. Again your vocab.. it's simply amazing. I liked how you put palpitations in here I never thought to see that in poetry. You did an amazing job babe I loved it! Your rhyming was perfect and you flow was too. I really loved this part:

Fading minds cling to each blissful thought
Tender lips yearn for a lover`s delicate caress
Crippling a heart in effort; her love she fought
Each piece of a broken soul, left weeping in distress..

Amazing Job!

5/5

Wow i loved this one, this one is my favorite of the 3 i read

favorite line:
Shimmering sweat glowing upon supple skin

brittany (MD)

That was a beautiful poem! You've got great talent. The rhythem of the poem was flawless and your choice of words was perfect. Keep it up! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Awhh this was so sweet<3 it was an amazing poem. and i can relate to it because i felt this way about a guy. actually,i still do. but anyways wonderful poem. 5/5 never stop writing!!