David, I loved it! I love lyrics and these were so beautiful! Your girl is really lucky. Great write. No wonder you are still on my favorites!

Ciao

Sorry...
i was lookin at kristy..
i mean...i dont mean to be mean
but to me...
she is kinda chubby..
i mean i was just lookin at her one day and she was jiggling..
no offense im just saying...
nice poem though

Love it so much! 5/5

Awww this was really cute I loved it!! I loved the chorus it was wonderful great job!