Saying Goodbye

by Austin   Mar 26, 2007


Rejected since day one
then i tried to run
but made a promise i couldn't break
to say goodbye oh how much fun

I road so far into the night
because of one simple fight
It was so cold i was in fright
that i would die this dreadful night

I got so lost in this cold night
trying to find, that which was right
the one i promised id say goodbye
but now i think I'm gonna die

i found my way, in that cold night
to find, that which was right
the shinning star, which showed the way
into the light, the place to stay

When i got their, it was still late
so i sat there, time to wait
until the time, which you woke up
and i said bye, and then gave up

I sat their, out in the cold
freezing up, i was so bold
i should of, just knocked away
to get away, from death that day

I was so lost, and full of rage
but you showed me, the bloody way
to leave behind, all my rage
to escape, this freaking cage

i was shown, how it feels
that someone, who truly cared
a friend that i, had missed so long
my life cant be going that wrong

Of course i love ya but that is shown
i guess ill leave you, all alone
you don't need me, i need you
now i must, leave you to.

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  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Ive read several of your poems, and this is the one i like the most. you have some homophone issues you need to fix. other than that nicely done. the rhymes didnt see to forced to me.

  • 16 years ago

    by CuPcAkEs AnD rAiMbOwS

    Thats an awesome poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by CuPcAkEs AnD rAiMbOwS

    Thats an awesome poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    Thats good!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really enjoyed this poem! The Ight sound got a little over used but it was still a good poem my favorite stanza was

    Rejected since day one
    then i tried to run
    but made a promise i couldn't break
    to say goodbye oh how much fun

    ^^ it was very easy to relate to and I loved it because it started out so great nice job!