Wow!! u really impress me. ilove the way how o write and flow was so good..keep it up

This is also nice poetry but u know what there are some words i had noticed "fight" always this words are present,, we just noticed it dont mind.. inspite of that honesly it is really great poem and u impress me coz at young age u can write poems like this! 5/5

Great poem though it did get lost at some parts. Other then that it really was great:)
5/5

Good poem.. i liked it.. awsome read! Keep writing! 5/5

I thought this one was better.. I really liked this part...

"I road so far into the night
because of one simple fight
It was so cold i was in fright
that i would die this dreadful night"

It really was a powerfulmessage, keep up the good work.
-Ally

I really enjoyed this poem! The Ight sound got a little over used but it was still a good poem my favorite stanza was

Rejected since day one
then i tried to run
but made a promise i couldn't break
to say goodbye oh how much fun

^^ it was very easy to relate to and I loved it because it started out so great nice job!

Thats good!!

Thats an awesome poem!

Thats an awesome poem!

Ive read several of your poems, and this is the one i like the most. you have some homophone issues you need to fix. other than that nicely done. the rhymes didnt see to forced to me.