Comments : I need you to know

  • 10 years ago

    by Black night

    THis is a grat poem, loved it.
    def 5/5
    keep writing.
    -Black night-

  • 10 years ago

    by Ash

    Aswsome poem.. and btw thanks for correcting me lol

  • 10 years ago

    by 111308

    Awww I Loved It
    This Was A Great Poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cathy

    Thats a very sweet poem dedicated to your brother, I have one myself that gets on my nerves but I guess like you said their just looking out. Well a great poem read, 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by roxy

    This is amazing. i love it :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina W.

    I love it =) your amazing,

  • 10 years ago

    by naomi

    Luv ur poem i guess all brothers are nice in disguise lol mines the same way xxx luv it xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenn

    That's so cute, I love it =) And the rhyming didn't sound forced at all.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kass

    LOVE IT!!! You are really good at this.
    Thanks for the comment

  • 10 years ago

    by Paula

    Great poem keep them coming and thanks for your comments xx

  • 10 years ago

    by nadsyy

    I love da first paragrapgh
    btw thanks for da comment =]
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by invisible shadow

    I like. Not the best butt it is a really good poem. Continue the nice job girl!! Amazing poem 4/5.. xox

  • 10 years ago

    by kRiStIe LeA

    Awww, thats adorable, thanx for the comment you sent me
    Me and him arent together anymore though
    but that was cute

  • 10 years ago

    by Lyric

    You are an amazing writer and you express your feelings well...........i loved this poem and many of your others. keep it up

    LYRIC

  • 10 years ago

    by lost soul!

    That was a very nice poem!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Angy

    Hmm this is very good i give it a five cuz its awsome and has potential!!!keep it up and thnx for the comments on mine!

  • 10 years ago

    by dyingxpassion

    Excellent poemm
    i can so related!!!
    my brother has always been there for me

  • 10 years ago

    by doug frazier

    Well done saffie,Your poem had such a nice easy going flow. It's funny how we don't know how much some one really cares about you, until they're not there anymore. You're lucky to have a brother that looks out for you, some brothers could care less. Well done dear. Hugs from Doug

  • 10 years ago

    by Dian PH

    VERY MEANINGFULL

  • 10 years ago

    by Mihaela

    Awww,that's sweet!!I like your way to express your feelings for the people you love.... 8-> I miss you a lot :X