Hmmm very deep feelings...its great!

Wonderful poem.
The flow was flawless and the rhyming wasn't forced.

'Girl play your cards to your advantage
but don't break more hearts in your wake
theirs no need to be so savage
do this for me, just for everyones sake?'

I loved it.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Great poem. I think that it is full of strong emotions. It was wonderful. Keep up the great work:) 5/5

It was a great poem, it sorta kinda get's confusing in the middle, but luckily comes back, nice work.. Keep it up, kiddo.
-Ally

Good poem. I'm confused though, do you love this girl or hate her?

Very good write!!
I can relate to this poem as if it were MY life.
I think the rhyming was right on track
and the stanza syllabol/flow was pretty good
overall I think you did a wonderful job
xoxo kaila

It's good.
There's a lot of feelings embedded into it.
The flow seems pretty rocky.
Especially for the first stanza's last line.
It just doesn't roll off the tongue, y'know?
Otherwise, it's good.
4/5 :]

Wow this is great! very easy to read. flows perfectly. great use of words and a lot of meaning in the poem. keep up the great work.

Ohh ur so young and ur so great! i cant imagine ur very creative at ur age.. can write like this very deep and impressive work. well i hope some readers would really love ur work coz its totally perfect and great flow 5/5