Comments : As the Sun Sets

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful--very elegant use of words. The poem painted very vivid pictures. Keep it up, I may just vote on some of your poems unless my comment can be useful lol. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. Excellent word choice and the flow was flawless!

  • 16 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    Wow. The imagary takes my breath away. Well done. Good flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Beautiful poem , I really loved it , like your style of writing,,great job
    Tracy

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Very vivid. I love it. Keep up the great work 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    One word to desrice the feeling as i read this..................SERENITY!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Excellten use of words. flow and nicely panned in your words. all poem was so good. take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Rather a nice description in your bio...hi was a good piece too

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is beautiful. The imagery paints a vivid picture. Creative and a joy to read from beginning to end. Excellent job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    This is heavenly, such delightful and evocative imagery. It's almost like the colors are falling from your brush. A pleasure to read.