Well done there joe. i loved this poem. it was excellent and i learnt some new ways to write from just reading it. how can i ever repay you?

5/5 David

Joe, This is so true....we look around to see so much suffering and realize our problems pale in comparison to others. I liked how you started the first verse with your pain and moved through the poem to the last verse where you stated:

Everyday I see someone worse off
I feel ripped apart inside myself
All my complaints about life
Seem to just vanish compared to these individuals

Nicely done! Debbie

What a message, we often become selfish and don't realize that we don't have it all that bad.
Nicely written.

This is so true...
5/5

God bless u

I liked this poem alot. I think you portrayed what you were saying well throughout the poem. it was a touching and enjoyable read. Well done ~mel

Again, I really liked the message in this poem, its very important to treat each other well. I found this poem had a rocky rhyme scheme, it rhymed in a few places, but very rarely. I liked the short and coppy lines, right to the point which is good, I hate wordyness:P.

Good work.

--Steph

I liked this poem but for me it wasn't my favorite out of yours 4/5

“my heart hurts”… this poem reminded me of that poem of mine.
YES, such a terrible pain it is :(

Dang...you so stinkin deep...(in a good way)....i loved this one too...that's one of the few ways to make yourself feel better is to think about how your life is so much better than the ones who suffer so much...great work...
Jonda Beth

This poem is really great, the message truly made me reflect. I'm reminded by my mother always not to complain, to be happy with what I have.. I should really listen to her lol
Nice job,
by the way, I'm Italian also :) in case you are

This poem is great. Very well written.
5/5

~Chelsea

Well written :D. Then again, I love all your poems :S. It's so true, about how I see people worse off than me, but I complain about insignificant things. I'm not very good at writing comments, but I mean it when I say 5/5. Good job :D