Oh wow...this has to be anothe favourite of mine by you.
The first stanza was such a great openerand it just kept getting better and better.
I thought the rhyme scheme was enjoyable and the flow was flawless.
Excellent work, as always.
This has got to be my favorite poem of yours, that you have ever written. And the truly sad thing is that all of this is true. =[ The flow was flawless, the word usage was great, and the emotions were pouring out through every word. Fantastic job, keep writing! 5/5
Hey thnx for commenting my poem i like this poem because it explains the situation and the horrible truth of this fact so well but to realise that you have wrote something like this is great because it means your not one of those people that want to take other peoples innocence as there ares o many out there today wicked job 5/5 :)
This poem was splendid. & the sad thing is all of this is true, not one word was a lie. The emotions poured out through every word, the flow was flawless, & the vocab was wonderful. Keep writing! 5.5