Broken

by Kaila   Mar 28, 2007


I've been left here to suffer.
I've been left here to cry.
I'm sitting here wishing,
that I could just die.

We were so close,
best friends till the end.
Until you met her,
that's when my problems began.

Now I'm left alone on weekends.
There's nothing left to do.
All I wish is for one thing,
and that one thing is you.

I want it to be like old times,
laughing and gossiping all night.
I don't want to end up mad and alone,
because of a stupid fight.

I just want my friend back,
there's nothing more to me.
I just want you back Mel,
so I can go back to being me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Friendship break ups suck. I can relate. Nice show of emtion,good flow, well penned. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Excellent write with so much emotion to which many can relate. Wonderful job.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aww such a sad friendship poem.
    I hope things get better for you.
    You did an awesome job with your
    poems. I enjoyed readint them.
    God Bless 5/5 6/6 Done
    <3Tay(^__^)

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Aww Kaila...Friends come and go...but true friends are always their. Wonderful poem 5/5

    :'(

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved this poem, I can easily relate to it.
    A lot of emotions behind those lines. They didn't quite describe as much, which makes it easier to relate to, I think.
    The flow was quite good, along with the rhyming.
    Keep it up, sweetie.
    5/5

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