Awww. this poem is a very strong poem. the message was evident. poetically it was fabulous.

i know the feeling of losing a best friend. life just isnt as grand. but youll either make amends or youll find someone else. but youll be alright.

chin up!

It's very heartfelt, and you've expressed you're intended point. Although it is a bit cliché, I enjoyed reading it - it had a nice tone and voice.

Aww.. this is cute.. simple words but still a heartfelt poem with love for your best friend

"I want it to be like old times,
laughing and gossiping all night.
I don't want to end up mad and alone,
because of a stupid fight."

That was a wonderful stanza & I have been through this with friends so many times. I can relate. This was a sad poem about friendship to read, yet a great poem all the same. Fantastic job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn

This is so strong, i hope you can get back with your friend, this was so beautiful but sad, 5/5
the flow was really deep, and the message was there.
gabriella

Awe. that is so sad.. =[ any issue with friends is the worst. im sorry. i hope things get better for you. 5/5 its a very good peom though. =]

Good poem. The flow was wonderful. And a lot of emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

Great rhymes, the flow really works well. The short lines seem to add a lot to this poem, although I'm not positive why. Last stanza could use some improvement so you don't have me/me as a rhyme. Other than that... great poem!

Another very well written piece of poetry. I loved the flow and your word choice. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Nice write, it has a great flow, and again I can relate! You put a lot of emotion into it! I loved this one! You're a great writer!

I have butterflies.. its like u r in MY shoes..!! lol.. i have that same problem but then i guess i just moved on!
5/5

I want it to be like old times,
laughing and gossiping all night.
I don't want to end up mad and alone,
because of a stupid fight.

i liked the whole poem... except for ^ stanza.... the last line doesnt flow right & makes the poem sound weird.

Awwww. It's okay hon. I've had to go through that too. But if she was truly your best friend she's going to miss you. Just recently me and my best friend realized how much we needed each other. (we were friends for 8 years.) But we've had so many fights. This was our best year. The fights were VERY minor. I hope you find a friend or get her back. God Bless 5/5
<3tayy
Thank you for the comments and rates!

I know how that felt. I liked this one. 5/5

I loved this poem, I can easily relate to it.
A lot of emotions behind those lines. They didn't quite describe as much, which makes it easier to relate to, I think.
The flow was quite good, along with the rhyming.
Keep it up, sweetie.
5/5

Aww Kaila...Friends come and go...but true friends are always their. Wonderful poem 5/5

:'(

Aww such a sad friendship poem.
I hope things get better for you.
You did an awesome job with your
poems. I enjoyed readint them.
God Bless 5/5 6/6 Done
<3Tay(^__^)

Excellent write with so much emotion to which many can relate. Wonderful job.

Peace, Joe

Friendship break ups suck. I can relate. Nice show of emtion,good flow, well penned. 4/5