This was a great poem and I know exactly what you mean. I wrote a poem about someone who is my diamond.
Great job.

"Diamonds are a girls best friend
Thats how the lyrics go
To me you are that diamond
With a warm enticing glow"

Absolutely excellent opening!!
And the rhythm was flawless
Well done!
5/5
*gem*

I looooove this, definitely one of your best!
A great opener, followed with each stanza better than the last and so0o romantic.
You should give it to him if you haven't already..or I will. HAHA

Wow. Flawless flow, intricately written, beautiful, ingenius! I am voting this for the weekly contest! It is beautiful... first one i actually enjoyed in a while. I applaud your writing abilities.

Some errors and dents in flow:

"Puts a smile upon my face" = Puts a smile on my face

"Its you I long to hold at night" = It's you I long to hold at night

"You re-ignited that spark" = You re-ignite that spark

10/5
~Stephen White

I like it...I'm one of those ppl who don't believe in love...but if I did this would prolly be one of my favorite poems...
Jonda Beth

Awesome....
I absolutely love the poetry you write on the subject of love. You have a unique way of getting the message out. That first love rips you apart and then you are scared and just when you thought the flame had died. Someone is there to reignite that spark you thought had died out when the last relationship ended. We don't have to let someone knock down those walls, they end up doing it without permission. I loved your message and applaud your ability to pen.
Great Job
Dixie

I enjoy reading great love poems like this
one that you penned so beautifully with
great rhyme and perfect flow.
Excellent read indeed job well done
and Write On,
Bogie

Very nice way of telling the one you love how you feel. If one continues to feel this way then the journey they are embarking on will be a wonderful one. I like it.

Love is very special and although it hurts at times, there really is nothing like it. Great write 5/5

Ohh, i relee liked this, had an awsome flow! Not to mention cute! 5/5 [=

A beautiful expression of love! Rhyme and flow was perfect. Well done!

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

Love does make us feel that way... how much it's true I've my doubts though... But again it's a very well written poem... And I mean it! Keep writing...

Great start for poetry, I love the way the poem just flows with gentle rhyhm.
5/5.

Tell me what you think of my poem called "The devil in the black dress".

Thx

Great poem.
Good flow and rhyming.
Really enjoyed reading it.
Well done