Hey this is a kewlie poem...

This is a really good poem....i mean REALLY GOOD! GOOD JOB!!

This poem is excellent, considering you wrote it in 4 min. I thought it was a real good topic that you wrote on because I feel when you write about sometging that means a lot to you, then it shows in your writing. 5/5 - keep up the good work.

I like the flow of the poem, well done!
5/5
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