WOW Bill, what a great write. So sad and heartwrenching, yet so true. You have depicted the sadness of the past and brought it to the present.

A wonderful job on this, friend.

Bravo.

Always,
Jeannie

Bill
Great job on this poem. You really did awesome.

The wind howls with cries of anguish
Fields run red with the blood of bondage
Commerce was created upon a road of bones
Families divided, broken and displaced
All the while the aristocracy raced

This really tears at the heart.
Take care your friend Cindy

This poem holds so much truth. It just makes you wish that we could get rid of slavery all together.

If only.

Fantastic job at this poem

Bill - Bill -Bill
This write shakes my heart. You have taken this topic and delivered a piece that rips down to the raw of the very truth.
Penned with heart and soul !
Take care dear friend

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Great work on this peice of writing. A lil history update though where you wrote "Whites became the curse"..its a bit strong and partly true but whites where slaves as well.
Its a good peice though 5/5.

I like ur poem~~
very descriptive and touching~~

especially the first stanza

^.^

Another great one!
God Bless!

WOW

Very nice and beautiful