Please take me

by Linden   Mar 31, 2007


Please take me to a better world
There must be someone there for me,
Making my dreams my thoughts and sounds
Then turning them into reality.
Please take me to a better place
Were hatred and doubt are not there,
Taking chances, doing risks,
Maybe someone else really does care.
Please take me away from this life
I cant stand it much more,
Take the first steps with me,
I want to be free away from it all.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Hey!! i liked it.... good job says a lot... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nicely written, short wish it was a little longer, But overall great poem with good emotion.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad, yet still so good to read.
    I really enjoyed the ending, I thought it was very strong and hits hard.
    The flow was flawless, the imagery great.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Doesnt every1..i feel lik tht a lot too...i think tht every1 does at least once in their life....keep on writing and u need more comments or more ppl need to see your work...cuz u got talent...

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Good poem i liked it. The ryhming slacked just a little but other then that.. it was good.

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