You show a lot of truth in your writing! 5/5

I loved this!! So many people on this site need to read this...not just read it...but actually take it into consideration...and just live it. I loved this so much. It just kinda seems like it should be more in the Inspirational category. Excellent write, Jobo! =] 5/5

` Glenduh!

Gr8 poem and really a gr8 message for every1!!!
5/5

God bless u

I really like this poem as beside the joy of reading it as a poem, it is also a great advise for mos of us. in my opinion this poem shows us a view of life from different prespective....... as always you have done a great job MR. Joe

keep it up, and 5/5 like always.

Hey well done joe! i loved it. was excellent in every way.

5/5 david

I liked your message, this poem kind of reminded me of the Deserada. I did find it was a little wordy in some places and I think you lacked a few punctation and quotation marks. I really liked the freeverse, I think it suits your topic very well. I enjoyed the bit about the negative and the positive, though I also found that a little wordy. Overall, I liked this poem, you had a very good message and good points, very inspirational.

I found a gramatical error:

"Well your wrong..."

It should be "you're"

--Steph

I liked it...to me the flow was a bit off like when i was reading there was no rhythm like you couldn't say it and tap your foot or kind of I don't know if you get what I'm saying but the message was good and the words you chose so nice job I gave it a 5/5

It was not really like a poem. It didn’t have a rhythm to it or so is my opinion. It was just a person talking about the things he had learned in his life.
I read all of it anyway and I found them all some facts everybody should know in their lives. thanks for putting them here! words of wisdom never get old.

Marjan

Hmmm....this is deep...i like...it makes me think about life, which is something we all need to do often...i usually like rhyming poems better...but this is an exception....great work
Jonda Beth

Amazing poem. You did a great job!
The flow is great.
5/5

~Chelsea

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Nice job. It sounds like a motivational speech but none the less a positive message in prose form. Kudos!