Slightly... pointless and disappointing. I didn't really get anything out of it. I know it probably is well written and i may just be missing the meaning and it is going right over my head but... Huh... oh well.

And, may i ask, is What is the CONTRADICTING... factor in this poem? I'm not quite sure i Get this meaning.

And BTW: In your other poem, i accidentaly mistook [im]moral for [im]mortal, and i was suggesting you title it [im]mortal but since it was [im]moral, my err and sorry for the mistake.

Still, as always, your vocabulary does prove pleasing.

5/5
~Stephen White

Wow.
Oh my gosh.
This is amazing.
I just love your work.

From my comprehension .. The second stanza is speaking of invisability. The first I'm not quite sure. I don't get 'Camomile as tea.' But, I do get the second line. At first I thought the first stanza was contradicting the second, but I'm not quite sure. :| About, any of my thoughts ont his piece except..
It's original.
Therefore, I love it. :]
I also the love fact that.. it's leaving questions. :]]

Keep it up.
Ohh, great vocab. btw.