Your words touch me. This is beautifully tragic. Wonderful Job.
The flow was great and the message touched the soul of the reader. Definitely one of my faves of yours.
Dixie

You never cease to amaze. It is your excellent flow that gets me...though I found one line i think needed a slight adjustment.

Inside the pain of tragedy that faced me each day

I would use "every" instead of "each" because each throws your flow off a bit.
Other than that...you amazed me again. I love your poetry. So good!
five/five
Charisma*

Jeannie
This poem is so awesome.....I can feel so much if this. It trips the heart while being read.

But fear has been my struggle it has brought me to my knees
And sometimes I'm defenseless as the pain rains down on me.

So much of this write I'm sure relates to so many.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Your Friend
Cindy

While reading it I found a tempo.
I loved it. :]
You did a great job.
Nice flow, rhyming..
Flawless once again.

Full of emotion. Very sad. The flow good. I love the poem in it's entirety but my favorite lines were: "But where are words to hold me in the sadness of the night
And comfort me with tenderness when I have no will to fight"

The ending topped off another piece well done!

This poem, is beautiful, the emotion really gets to your heart. You can lose yourself in the poem in your own little world.

WOW this was really great to read thank you sooo much for making it :p. Very beautiful indeed!!! 5/5

You did a great job you write beautifully i loved it 5/5

I really Like This Poem (5)

I love your style, i can relate to alot of it , your really good check out mine some time

Ashley

I absolutely loved that poem, it's definately one of my favorites ^_^ 5/5

Very good poem, I enojoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment some of my poems.

This flowed really well. I'm sure loads of people will relate to it. I do.
Hope it get's better.
xXAnother Crystal Tear FallsXx

Wow, that is such an amazing poem.. so much emotion. your a really great writer keep it up :)