Comments : Awe Babe<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was an interesting poem. It was written in a quicker pace. At times it seemed rushed and like the rhythm was forced but it all came together and wasn't bad.

  • 16 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Thats so sad but so sweet at the same time and i really enjoyed your title..great work!!

    melissa

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really love this but there are things that need some fixing the repitition on the OO sound got kind of old mix it up a bit and get some synanyms it will sound a lot better and give it a special touch nice job tho