You have penned a beautiful write. The devestation of which you wrote this, shows in every verse... every line. To know that kind of love and loss is one that I,, too, can relate with. It's the most heartwrenching feeling one could ever experience.
As I said to Nitin, this poem was completely mind blowing. I fell in love with it. ;p I tried picking my favourite stanza, but the whole poem is just amazing. I love every line of it. Never stop writing!
Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
i am nominated this poem as a contest . i am giving my vote as a senior memebr. its so nice work. i loved the every word of this poem. good expression. its my first vote for contest to anyone as a senoir memeber.
i loved the work you both had done in this poem.