Comments : How Could I Ever Leave You ( Collab)

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Cindy,

    Would have given up my life for you
    You vowed that you would never leave
    Yet here I am so cold and alone
    Your words of love I always believed

    I know from where this came.
    I really feel great after every collab that we do, You are certainly a great soul i have ever met. I hope we keep this up.

    All the best and take care
    Thanks a ton for everything

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Oh well done. this was an amazing poem! both of you! the wording and ammount of love in this poem was superb.

    5/5 David

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Cindy and End of Eternity,

    You have penned a beautiful write. The devestation of which you wrote this, shows in every verse... every line. To know that kind of love and loss is one that I,, too, can relate with. It's the most heartwrenching feeling one could ever experience.

    You two did an exceptional job on this... Bravo.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 11 years ago

    by Poetess

    As I said to Nitin, this poem was completely mind blowing. I fell in love with it. ;p I tried picking my favourite stanza, but the whole poem is just amazing. I love every line of it. Never stop writing!

    ` Liz

  • 11 years ago

    by chavii

    Amazing great write , wonderful job by you two.You two are great team.

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely written collab once again....can't pick a fav verse....love it all! 5/5 Debbie

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    "Waiting for you with open arms
    How could I ever leave you
    Always needed you here with me
    To our love I'll always be true"

    Beautiful! Simply beautiful!
    When you two do a collab, i already know it's going to be a diamond!!
    And i'm never disappointed =)
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 11 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Lovely written and expressed! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I really appreciate your last comments. Thank you!

  • 11 years ago

    by ben thompson

    This poem by you and End Of Eternity Is really great. Hope you guys write many more of these pieces. Keep up the good work.
    Nice to see you happy.
    Ben

  • 11 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Wow that was truely excellent very sad,sorry you lost your love.hope one day you will be reunited again.
    all in all excellent

    please if u hav time i would really like if u could comment on one of my poems only writting short time your say would mean a lot thank you
    amanda

  • 11 years ago

    by Lithium

    Great poem, i love the idea of the midnight train thats really cool, your words as always have an impact on my emotions as they are so deep and heartfelt, another wonderful poem .

  • 11 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    "Waiting for you with open arms
    How could I ever leave you
    Always needed you here with me
    To our love I'll always be true"

    This stanza was my favorite. This was an excellent collab and so heartwarming.
    Bravo.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very nice collaboration. It is nice to see styles mesh in these type writes. Full of emotion.

  • 11 years ago

    by Barry

    Beautifully written by you both...styles do mesh and bring something else with it.....
    I could not pick out one verse the whole poem was so good........

  • 11 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 simply beautiful poem. never a truer word spoken. i'm able to relate to everything you've written. well done your poem is amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

    Waiting for you with open arms
    How could I ever leave you

    i am nominated this poem as a contest . i am giving my vote as a senior memebr. its so nice work. i loved the every word of this poem. good expression. its my first vote for contest to anyone as a senoir memeber.
    i loved the work you both had done in this poem.
    take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is such a fantastically well penned poem... it has everything. great imagry and heartbreak... ur pain is plain to see. enjoyed reading this, thanks x

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats Cindy and Nitin! This is an excellent collab and well deserving of winning the weekly contest!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lawrence Suell

    Cindy,
    God that hurts and yet it is beautiful!
    L. Suell