Well written, I like it!
5/5

Hiya Byron =)
That was a beautiful poem and very true as to what is needed and what you just have to live with in this funny, strange thing called life =D
Look forward to reading more of your work in the future :)
Rhea (Rhiannon Morgana)

This poem has so much to offer. You captured it all and with it you made a beautiful poem that i really enjoyed. the flow was there and I think it great that you came up with this kind of poem idea. Great job!