Taking over me

by amanda flood   Apr 5, 2007


I am so tired
and i just want to sleep
you really don't know
what you are doing to me
you are running me down
i am falling deeper into you
so deep i cant even see trough you
i am blinded to your lies
i am blinded to your defeat
i am blinded by everything you do to me
it's like you keep hypnotizing me
making me fall for you
i cant seem to realize
you are just no good for me
mam keeps telling me
to keep away from you
every time she says this
i keep falling more in love with you
you are my life
you are me
you don't even know
you have taking over me
i want to be six feet beneath
i want to just sleep
and ex cape away from all of you
and go where nobody knows

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  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Its good poem , your struggle within is reflected well in words.Best of luck.

    Thanks for your comment, really aprreciate it .
    Chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hi there,

    This poem had an amazing flow to it. I would suggest breaking it into stanzas but other than that, a true well penned poem with a deeper meaing. It feels like it has a deep story to go along with it. worth 5/5. Great read!

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