The emotion in this just flows wonderfully!
I like the imagery used with the petals..
Good job!

Beautiful poem. And as said by the person before me, the petals made a very good image while reading.

-ashley

Just like PoeticXtragedy said, the emotion flows so good and the petals really create a nice image, good poem , really .

5/5

I found this poem to be beautifully written. I loved the ryhme scheme and the flow was just great. The imagery was fantastic i could really see this all playing in my mind while reading it. As for the format i liked how you set it up two lines at a time the only thing i suggest is to capitalize the first word of every line it would make it look a little neater to me but thats just my opinion.
Thanks for the comments on my poems btw. 5/5 ~mel

This was a great poem. I loved it, a lot different from your usual style, and i liked the metaphorical use of the petals.
Brilliant.
5/5
-Black night-

Wow I really liked that. The ending was what got me the most. Your flow was fantastic as well. I liked your style vocabulary. IU noticed that everyone has one. Yours is uniquely great. And OMG you are a snoopy fan too???? Im a snoopy FREAK!!! lol thats funny. haha anyone who likes snoopy is worth talking to/ So hey do you have aim or yahoo, or any of them? I ahve ALL of the instant messangers. lol okie doke. Thank you for the comment.

God bless
~skittles

Good imagry, great flow, This was an excellent read. I ejoyed reading it. Keep up the good work

I liked it I think it was a little over my head for me but that's not your fault lol well I think you did a fabulous job!

I don't know what to make of this poem.
Happy or sad. Lol.
I think it's a beautiful thing
To see death as something other than
Hearbreaking.
There are different types of perspectives out there.
I'm glad you have chosen something different
From everybody else.
I like this poem.
It's creative.
Well written
It's also deep.
5/5 :]

Your a good writer!! keep up the good work

Reat poem. i like it.

Ahh!! I am truly running out of words to say, I have this huge smile on my face lol that sounds so queer. Amazing poem once again you are going onto my favorite authors!! Amazing I tell you!! xxx Much love from Roxy

I like your description and the materials u used (all about nature). . you nicely portray a contrast of serenity in each words with the dark settings in here. great work!

AMH,
I liked the happy spirit in this poem.

Now, let's have a talk on my favorite line:

"the petals dance, the trees sway, all nature saluting you"
It's called looking through another's eyes. Something I've always been interested in. to know how others watch the things move. They say "beauty is in the eyes of the beholder". And how well they say it. That’s why I read poems. it's like borrowing someone’s eyes for a few minutes. Yours at the time you wrote this, wanted to see everything dance. Aye, the death too can dance and look majestic. This however is a little dangerous, for it may tempt us, the readers to want to give death a hug and a hug may always go a little further.
So the lesson behind this, is: Don't hug death, unless it hugs you first 8-]

Marjan

Wow yet agian with the endings haha they rock

This is a awesome piece of work...the feeling is displayed incredibly...love it !