Comments : Well Whiskey

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    Wow! This is so very deep and heart wrenchig. The effects of alcohol is so devastating. You have captured so much emotion in this piece.

    Now lifeless arms hold to the whiskey
    A savior to the soul is thought
    Blood eyes dead and no longer see
    As once again the bottle drops.

    This really hits home. Since I am watching someone I care for killing themselves with this.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved this poem.
    Heart breaking, but amazing. :]
    Another great job, hun.

    the last stanza, i loved it. :]
    keep it up.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lu

    I just can't choose a favorite part because the entire piece just grips my heart and makes me want to cry.

    A savior to the soul is thought
    ^^^
    If only my brother could read these words ... and understand
    I pray he someday will!

    Touching read Jeannie.
    Take care Auntie
    Luanne

  • 10 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    "Just bits of hell that pull it under
    And sifts among the pain that stands."

    How beautifully you sum up the pain in these words! this is a masterpiece truly

    peace
    shobhana

  • 10 years ago

    by Dado

    Now lifeless arms hold to the whiskey
    A savior to the soul is thought
    Blood eyes dead and no longer see
    As once again the bottle drops.

    beautiully beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I luv it....very well written

  • 10 years ago

    by Autumn

    I've been through this in my life to it was so hard.

    I like your poem it was very good.

    I love the words that you used.

    Keep on writting and keep up the good work

    Take care.
    Autumn