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Very emotional..great piece..I liked it..
~sarah~

I really like it..i know how you feel though..my older brother was like my best friend and he got married...but you have good work..keep it up

I like this poem. i think you did an excellent job. i have a sister that ran out on me when i was real young. she went to live at her moms. i grew up with just me & my brothers. but now that she came back into my life in my older years. i finally got what i missed out on years ago.

This was a pretty good poem i like it and it had a good story line too it, i dont have any older sisters so i dont know how it would feel to have urs go off and get married but i have a younger sister and shes gettin into boys real bad and i dont hardly see her and thats hard for we were close so i can kind of relate, but really good poem keep it up

I liked but the whole flow/structure was off other then that it was good