Heart symbol

by David   Apr 7, 2007


Heart symbol

Heart is the symbol of love
Drawn by lovers at the start
Inscribed with words of forever and always
Yet, hearts can be torn apart

Fighting, crying
Pieces breaking in half
Lives are changed forever
And all of a sudden you realize
They are apart of your past

Although so pretty
Be careful when drawing a heart
They are delicate
They can easily fall apart

Hearts are colored
In a dark blood red
Don't be their next victim
Please, don't be misled.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Beautiful poem David.. I love how you use your words, it's a very sad but lovely poem.

    "Inscribed with words of forever and always
    Yet, hearts can be torn apart"

    I think I love that part the best, especially the last line. Nice job David!!!! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    Very nicely written

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The message is diffrent this time, I like that variety, anyways The word choice was vivid and excellently placed. The flow again flawless, well penned, a great read, but an even better Write. 5/5 If you keep writting I will keep reading.

  • 16 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    I LOVE THIS POEM IT SHOWS IT SHOWS HOW DELICATE A HEART CAN BE

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Very powerful, i relee admire this poem

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