This is really good David. Quite unique, I think. I absolutely love the first stanza. It's just worded so well, it really stood out to me. This is all such truth, how a heart is so delicate and all that. I can relate to this in my own way. Well done on this. =] 5/5

Tammie

Hey David

This is a beautiful and sad poem. It shows how fragile a heart can be. It was a great read. 5/5. It was wonderful

Kalee

So true about the symbol of love....so delicate yet so strong....nicely written....keep writing!

Oh so true lovin it

Oh so true lovin it

Very nice indeed. Heartsw are so delicate yet they are also the most resilant (sp?) what other organ can heal when shattered so often.

You have again done a wonderful job with your poetic pen babe. Keep it up.

--Sher

Well penned, I wish I had read this before I fell so deeply in love because my heart was definently torn apart. Anyways, great job and I look forward to reading your next poem.

David
Good job on this poem. Hearts are so easily broken. Sometimes through break ups or through death.... the end results are always pain. Very sad write.

Take Care Cindy

This is so beautiful, it's so easy to love this poem, mostly because it is true and easy to relate too, the sad flow was really smooth and the wording was gorgeous, 5/5
gabriella

Oh now you tell me that hearts can be broken. Where were you in the beginning?
Anyway, great poem with great expressions.

Very sad, but you write so beautifully, I loved it keep up the good work. 5/5

Nicely composed

Although so pretty
Be careful when drawing a heart
They are delicate
They can easily fall apart

This stanza had me spell bound.. I LOVED it. It was an amazing work of art David, you captured the essence of the heart. 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Again very good poem i should just stop reading them and put 5 all down your poems but since i enjoy reading and im not lazy ill just comment on every1

Very powerful, i relee admire this poem

I LOVE THIS POEM IT SHOWS IT SHOWS HOW DELICATE A HEART CAN BE

The message is diffrent this time, I like that variety, anyways The word choice was vivid and excellently placed. The flow again flawless, well penned, a great read, but an even better Write. 5/5 If you keep writting I will keep reading.

Very nicely written

Beautiful poem David.. I love how you use your words, it's a very sad but lovely poem.

"Inscribed with words of forever and always
Yet, hearts can be torn apart"

I think I love that part the best, especially the last line. Nice job David!!!! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~