Wow..thts really sad and 4 some reason almost brought me to tears...mayb i can relate to it really bad..but tht poem was really awsome...awsome write =D

Hey colby! are you still part of the P.O.E.M club?? cos we haven't heard from you in a while aye.. so can u just let me know please?

btw this poem is beautiful! keep up the great work

Hey.. i really like this poem...keep up the GREAT witting!!!!

Nice rythm and rhyme. Flows nicely.

Aven

Very well written once again. I enjoyed reading this and some part are very much true. Keep it up!! 5/5