Comments : Make me proud

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Very nice poem, 5/5 i can relate to your poem my mother had a similar cry but my father let her down very nice poem and thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alison

    This is so sad, but it tells a story of a mother grieving and wanting her husband to do better i think. good job =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with ^^

    It's a very sad piece that tells a tale of mother just wanting things to be put right.
    Very emotive
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Oh yes. this so far today is the best poem i have read! it was so just, just awesome!

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony smith

    This is a really well put to together poem. keep up the good work