Comments : Help me

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    So many of us feel sad in our daily life but not all of us could express the way you did here. Very nicely written indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    You pinpointed this emotion well, now all you need to do is write a poem telling us how to overcome it like you shall do soon enough.

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    This is really a superb poem , the emotions run real high.Good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    I liked this poem, i really love it when ppl put so much feeling in to one poem, its a tallent! keepup the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeff

    One one side this is the great poem,I loved it.
    On the helping side,you just have to choose to ignore all the emotions that are meant to destroy you.Focus on the positives and u shall be fine.