Wow, this is a powerful poem and a half lol, it is so amazing it is full of such strong emotions, i really hope the person in it is not you but i cavn sympathise with so many of those feelings, they are so horrible but this poem is fantastic xx

I love it, so strong and true and powerful words. keep writing! i totally love reading your stuff. im just a little obsessed fan of yours! =P

stay strong darling, xxxxxxx

Wow just like what they said your poem really is strong. a suicidal poem. liked how you made it. it really touched me

OMg...i absolutley loved it...it spoke of an emotion that's real...what's the point of asking questoins to the answers you can see?...It had a good flow and a perfect ending...the title is also eye catching...great job!
Jonda Beth

5/5 excellent job. that was so unbelievbly sad and well writen. it was amsolutly amazing and the rhyming was perfect. i loved it. ='[

Wow, this is an amazingly written poem and its so true.
your such a good writer, never stop.
<3Cindy

I loved this poem, it really told me something! You are great, keep it up! 5/5

While the entire poem is powerful beyond belief, the stanza that moved me most was "I don't eat because I'm fat
Don't tell me that I'm not
And I cut because I want to
Trust me, it's all I've got". Remarkable job!

This was really great. i could really relate to it. great description and feeling. keep it up.

I really loved this poem, it was a different style i really enjoyed reading it, u write very well and i kno how u feel and how hard it is. writing is a great way to deal with it, and i swear one day it will get better

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great poem 5/5

Very powerful poem. I loved reading it. I liked the flow of it and how it kept me wanting to finish it :) I know you may have heard thousands of times but keep your chin up you not know what good will be thrown in your life and make you feel wonderful :) 5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

So sad and sorrowful from head to toe...from start to end and so good imaginery and wording i especially liked those

Borderline or bipolar
Or something of the kind
Then they choose to tell me
That it's all just in my mind

Keep it up
Good job
Laura

I really enjoyed reding this poem. by enjoyed i mean it was really good i didn't enjoy the fact that you must have, been going through hell. i can really feel the intensity of your emotions and the struggle you are having. i love poems that i can relate to and this is one of them. my favourite part being.

Borderline or bipolar
Or something of the kind
Then they choose to tell me
That it's all just in my mind

Day after day
I hear them talk and still
Nothing changes how I feel
Or who I want to kill

i always forget to go back to peoples profiles to check there other peoms. so if you post anymore poems you want people to read just put a post of haven for teens coz i will prob remember than. lol

cya

Holy shit. thats amazing...

Holy man. thats amazing...

OMG.... This poem was so sad and amazing. IT WAS AMAZINGLY WRITTEN. Well done. 5/5

Kalee

That was excellent babe, it reminded me of my style of writing also. Like when you repeated the stanza,
"Day after day
I hear them talk and still
Nothing changes how I feel
Or who I want to kill"
It gave it such great flow. 5/5

-Liz-
~muahs to all~

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