Comments : You Just Pushed Me To My Death

  • 11 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Wow, this is a powerful poem and a half lol, it is so amazing it is full of such strong emotions, i really hope the person in it is not you but i cavn sympathise with so many of those feelings, they are so horrible but this poem is fantastic xx

  • 11 years ago

    by No one

    I love it, so strong and true and powerful words. keep writing! i totally love reading your stuff. im just a little obsessed fan of yours! =P

    stay strong darling, xxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Jubail

    Wow just like what they said your poem really is strong. a suicidal poem. liked how you made it. it really touched me

  • OMg...i absolutley loved it...it spoke of an emotion that's real...what's the point of asking questoins to the answers you can see?...It had a good flow and a perfect ending...the title is also eye catching...great job!
    Jonda Beth

  • 11 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 excellent job. that was so unbelievbly sad and well writen. it was amsolutly amazing and the rhyming was perfect. i loved it. ='[

  • 11 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    Wow, this is an amazingly written poem and its so true.
    your such a good writer, never stop.
    <3Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Amanda

    I loved this poem, it really told me something! You are great, keep it up! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    While the entire poem is powerful beyond belief, the stanza that moved me most was "I don't eat because I'm fat
    Don't tell me that I'm not
    And I cut because I want to
    Trust me, it's all I've got". Remarkable job!

  • 11 years ago

    by amber

    This was really great. i could really relate to it. great description and feeling. keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tiffani

    I really loved this poem, it was a different style i really enjoyed reading it, u write very well and i kno how u feel and how hard it is. writing is a great way to deal with it, and i swear one day it will get better

    <3
    great poem 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Very powerful poem. I loved reading it. I liked the flow of it and how it kept me wanting to finish it :) I know you may have heard thousands of times but keep your chin up you not know what good will be thrown in your life and make you feel wonderful :) 5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 11 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So sad and sorrowful from head to toe...from start to end and so good imaginery and wording i especially liked those

    Borderline or bipolar
    Or something of the kind
    Then they choose to tell me
    That it's all just in my mind

    Keep it up
    Good job
    Laura

  • 11 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    I really enjoyed reding this poem. by enjoyed i mean it was really good i didn't enjoy the fact that you must have, been going through hell. i can really feel the intensity of your emotions and the struggle you are having. i love poems that i can relate to and this is one of them. my favourite part being.

    Borderline or bipolar
    Or something of the kind
    Then they choose to tell me
    That it's all just in my mind

    Day after day
    I hear them talk and still
    Nothing changes how I feel
    Or who I want to kill

    i always forget to go back to peoples profiles to check there other peoms. so if you post anymore poems you want people to read just put a post of haven for teens coz i will prob remember than. lol

    cya

  • 11 years ago

    by Sammy

    Holy shit. thats amazing...

  • 11 years ago

    by Sammy

    Holy man. thats amazing...

  • 11 years ago

    by Kalee

    OMG.... This poem was so sad and amazing. IT WAS AMAZINGLY WRITTEN. Well done. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 11 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That was excellent babe, it reminded me of my style of writing also. Like when you repeated the stanza,
    "Day after day
    I hear them talk and still
    Nothing changes how I feel
    Or who I want to kill"
    It gave it such great flow. 5/5

    -Liz-
    ~muahs to all~

  • 11 years ago

    by Run out of words

    LOVE

  • 11 years ago

    by Run out of words

    THE

  • 11 years ago

    by Run out of words

    POEM