Would You Mind?

by Pia   Apr 9, 2007


Would you mind
If I take your time?
To tell you I'm
stuck in a line,
of waiting girls,
and blinding swirls,
Everything is blurred,
and my words slur,
When I see you there,
can't help but stare,
But I'm unaware,
that you're everywhere,
Wonder if you
feel like I do,
Who'd you prefer,
is it me or her?
Send me as sign,
would you be mine?
And clear this haze,
complete the maze,
Stand me out
from this busy crowd,
You look at me,
Like a sting from a bee,
I get all funny,
Like a jumping flea,
You're an amazement,
and just so different,
I'm stupified,
And paralysed,
You do these things,
Mix up my feelings,
I can't ignore
Or just stare at the floor,
`Cause I'm blinded by
that gaze in your eyes,
I want you so
Won't let you go,
Just find me there
In that long row,
So is it a crime
to write this rhyme,
And take some of
your precious time?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    Meaning behind a piece is beautiful. My poems are more riddles and mystery based on my emotions and personality. I hint things about me in each one. I'm complicated... Good job ^.-

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I like this poem a lot...i can really relate!