Oh so very true we all want some love 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Simple yet honest and beautiful in its own way...keep writing and keep smiling always..

Yeah, it's very simple yet very thoughtful! I like the theme... Well written...

"I'm a child,
who refuses to grow up,"

I get called that so many times. A child who won't grow up.
The ending to this piece was very nicely done m'dear.
It summed the whole meaning up superbly. We are all human at the end of the day and have the same wants and needs.
Excellent little piece
5/5
*Gem*

This is superb. So many personlaities we have inside and still in the end we keep on searching for the real soul in us. This life is so complicated until love comes our way.

Great write indeed, loved it

all the best and take care

Wonderful.
A poem that I am sure many can relate to.
"I'm a child,
who refuses to grow up,"
^ My favorite couplet. Simply wonderful job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Chavii
I really liked this poem. We all have so many diffrent things inside of us. I think we all always want to be loved. Great job!

I'm a child,
who refuses to grow up,

I loved these lines.
Take Care Cindy

Another great poem. You have a very unique style in your poetry.
Keep it up.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.

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what can I say when all it was to say was allready said?
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Very good poem, nice work I really enjoyed it.

PS. Plz rate and comment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

Hey you!
get writing some more poems! lol
I miss reading them!
=)
*Gem*

Your poem has a lot of feeling in it and its so true

-scott

I love your poem....it has so much meaning...I can relate....thanks for sharing!! :)

I loved this, it really had meaning but yet no rhyme. Thats what made it stand out, the simpleness of it.

Bethany

We all have our different roles in life.....interesting.....nicely done....like the ending most of all....the ultimate, no matter our lot....to love and be loved!

That was nice

Interesting poem and well penned. I enjoyed it thoroughly. 5/5. I look forward to reading more of your peoms.

Hey i love this poem, "I'm a dreamer,
Who takes refuge in imaginary worlds."is my favorite part. Well keep up the good work!

Loved the poem! really nice meaning! very simple and thoughtful
---tara