Am I Crazy to Wish Upon the Stars?

by Brigitte   Apr 10, 2007


At night I lay snuggled in my bed
Ambitions growling, still unfed
Tossing and turning all night long
Whispering the words of a romance song

Out my window stars shine bright
A speckled blanket of earthen light
Wishes float to the tip of my tongue,
A place where thousands before once hung.

Is there a star for that one wish?
Or am I simply being childish?
Could this little ball of fire,
Grant my heart it's one desire?

Am I crazy to wish upon a star?
A blazing angel so mysteriously far?
Or is there more than the eye can see,
A tiny window that lets my heart believe

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Your choice of words is very beautiful. The flow of all of your poems is great and makes them even more powerful and breath-taking. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    I love it, excellent, a very nice title, and i loved the style you used, excellent work, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Amazing poem. I really loved this poem. It is very well written. The flow was great. Your a really good writer, I wish i was good like you lol. well done. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Beautiful write, this is what I sort of meant. I hope you can see the difference between this poem, and the first poem I commented. There was detail in this poem, but it was written well, without having to excessively use pronouns. The flow and rhyme scheme were also great, and the content was sweet. I really liked the ending of this one, because it gives a lot of hope. Good job on this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    This is a good write, i personaly believe that every wish needs a shooting star, or a penny in a well.
    symbols for things we hope for. (:

    tom/5

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