Comments : Carrying My Burdens

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Cindy

    hey i can comment. yay. as always i loved this poem. it was heartfelt and emotional.

    and to dedicate this to another member is so sweet.

    5/5 always. David

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a sweet and thoughtful dedication to a dear friend. The flow and message were superb!

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Thank you for such a beautiful dedication. What else could anyone expect, you have already given more than i could think of. Just pray that this friendship keeps on growing and growing. Thank you so much once again.

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    Firstly, congrats on the century , i been waiting to see your 100th poem :)

    About poem, its such a beautiful inspirational poem and real tribute to friendship ,nitin and you both are lucky to have each other as true friends.

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Gorgeous poem i love your last stanza, it puts the poem in a whole other perspective great writing cindy well done

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    It's so beautiful..
    A poem dedicated to a friend is always so gorgeous.
    And you've reached the 100 mark! Well done sweets =)
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write cindy. hope you feel better. best wishes. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem cindy, love the flow, i give it a 5/5!!! congradulations on the 100th poem, and it is very good!!! please keep writing!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    P.s. the 4th stanza 2nd line (to) should be (too).

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cindy,

    Once again, what a wonderful poem. You never cease to amaze me. The emotions were strong, the flow was flawless, and overall, it was wonderful. Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, nice work I really enjoyed it.

    PS. Plz rate and comment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

  • 10 years ago

    by Delicious 42

    I really am feeling you on this poem. It is so deep and rich. You really made it flow and it make me come alive. You did yo thang and i enjoyed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cathy

    I'm very use to see such beautiful poems written by you, but yet I am still amazed! What a beautiful write dedicated to a friend.

  • 10 years ago

    by ReBecca

    Cindy, what a wonderful poem to write for your friend. I have a best friend who has been there for me through so many things, including the death of my daughter. I wrote a poem for her called "Tribute", that is similar to this one.

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Cindy,

    What a wonderful dedication. A little sad though. The flow was flawless, emotions were clear, and your word usage was good. :]

    "The story of my life
    Nothing but pain and sorrow
    You have taught me
    There's always a tomorrow"

    ^ That stanza is my favorite. Probably due to the fact that I can relate so much. Another fantastic write hun, keep writing! 5/5 =]

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy...what a beautiful decication of friendship...so glad you have found such a rock to help brighten your life. 5/5 Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I like how its real
    tru
    sentamental
    i'm loving it

  • 10 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Interesting poem and well penned. I enjoyed it thoroughly. 5/5. I look forward to reading more of your peoms.

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awww, that is soo cute and sweet!!
    Wonderful write to your friend.
    I hope they loved it, or love it.
    Great job! Keep up the wonderful work!
    GOd Bless 5/5
    <3Tayy

  • 10 years ago

    by moonlil

    My god, your poems make me almost cry. Loved this one. It was so touching.