A lovely piece, it possessed a perpetual rhyme and a heartfelt story.
When I first came to this site, my poetry wasn't fantastic. It still isn't, but I have adopted new skills with the pen and I am inspired by the great poets on this here.
Seeing that you have come to this site with positive intentions towards your poetry, you too, will succeed in anything you wish to write, once you get going. This is a wonderful piece, so keep writing!

Good luck :).

And thank you for commenting on my piece.

Wow!!
i loved this poem!!
ive been where uv been...just not w/ a girl lol
after time passes, ull stop writting about her..and ur heart will heal.
im going on my 3rd year and im still writting about "him". it just takes some time...
stay strong
5/5
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jenie

This one is really good too... Hope you don't mind, but wow you are a really good poet, i don't see y you have no awards!!!

Simple, sweet and sad. What a nice combination. The flow was good and the piece was full of emotion. Nice job!

What a sad love poem....nicely written and full of that heartbreak only love can bring!

I was just wondering has this really happened to you? b/c it sounds like it anyways i love it. filled w/emtion, and love it was great

Jamie

Simple vocabulary, but it held a lot of meaning . Filled with emotion . Makes me wonder ... ;P The flow was good, and the rhyming too . I don`t have much negative to say about it .
Nicely done .
..__MiNDYY

Wow, this is truly a remarkable poem... It's sweet, and it tells a story, good work!!! ~Sam~

Such a beautiful poem.. .It's really good... and sad

Such a beautiful poem.. .It's really good... and sad