This was really sad I could feel all the emotion you put into it, it was beautiful. Keep it up 5/5

Thank you nikki, That was very thoughtful of you ,and i'm glad i could share it with the world ,there are a lot more to come ,now that i know what i can do with them,,,,,,,,,again thanks

I really cried when i red this ..im so sorry but i like your style

Ashley

This poem is very sad... I am deeply sorry you went through this and I know, and you should know, your mom loved you and did what she thought was best... Great poem and keep writting! It helps get everything off your chest!!

This is a horrifying experience you have gone through. It breaks my heart to know there are people that experience this. I am so sorry for your trials and tribulations you have experienced. I trust you will break free from the memories that haunt you and become a better man because of the things you have gone through.
Take Care,
Kay

Your poems are all really good, i think they are very deep! Most ppl like to keep things like this a secret, but you not doing that is probably going to help someone.

Wow, amazing. So sorry for your experiences and its true wounds never really heal. I wish you all the best and your writing is breath taking, so much emotion. Thank you for sharing your work its incredible.

This poem nearly had me in tears. No one deserves to be treated this way. You wrote it very well and all the emotion can be seen. I hope your experiences have made you stronger as a person and hope that the future bring nothing but happiness to your life.
xxx.

Tracy
Another heart wrenching piece you have penned. It is such a tragedy that this has to happen to any child. Hopefully by your writing someone will find the courage to make a call and help a child they know is in trouble. Excellent job on your verse.
Take Care Cindy

WOW!!! IM SO SORRY. I THINK YOU'VE GROWN BETTER AS A PERSON THOUGH AND I READ SOME OF YOUR POEMS AND I THINK THEY'RE REALLY GREAT!

I finally got to read this.

WOW!! I'm speechless. I don't know what to say. It's amazing how you could just give off a little bit of your pain and let us feel what your feeling. Great! 5/5

Ok honestly I cried while I was reading this.. that is sooo sad!

Wow that is really good.sorta reminds me of a ex bestfriend of mine.but this is really good. 5/5

I really cried reading this one

I know how you feel! Your scarred but Strong!

How can anyone survive that. How brave are you to come through that, survive and the control the anger that these people have caused you. Reading that is truelay painful so wrting it must have been 10 times worse. This is such an evil crime and im sorry it happend to you - to any child. How will they ever understand why adults do this to them. This is such a shocking poem, i just can not comprehen anyone doing that to a child. God Bless and take care. (5/5)

Kelly
xx

Very sad poem, although i thought it could have been more clear, some parts I didn't understand, maybe its just me, but great poem though, great job, keep it up.

Tracy this is so sad, if you want to talk about anything I am on your side, man you have really hard childish. I am proud of you my friend, I think that I couldn't write about this topic that it is happen to me... Well done, great job, I like this poem very much but you expressed emotions... Well I never been punched but I felt your pain like my own, you describe it amazingly. You are also very talented and you created superb imagery. Very touching piece, to be honest I almost cried, you are GREAT person my friend.
Keep up, for this transfer of emotions on the readers you deserves much more than 5/5