It was so touching and sweet..showed real emotions hun
But there is a problem occured there
'I�m sorry' when you correct this,it would be perfect
Take care hun
Your friend
Laura

This was really sweet and beautiful, but ya the only problem was what lauRa said up there, the rest was absolutely gorgeous, 5/5
luv gabriella

Girl this is VERY GOOD.. Love it keep it up.. And i added a new poem "Revenge" should i enter that one?

Nice i rally liked this one

Ithe only thing bad i noticed was the annoying things that replace apostrophes on this site, if u want it to be perfect n all... anyway amazing poem,you express how you feel with such clarity and i love the sincerity behind your well penned words.

Uhm I like the way you rhyme some stanza :) this is so sweet I like it! it flowed well! so.. I'll give it a 5/5! :) good job!

Hey sorry for the late comment by the way

Nice ryhming, i really like it.
5/5

WOW... i really feel this one aye... loss blows, but you get on with life. Im sorry to hear you lost someone dear to you though... good write never the less