Comments : A million times

  • 11 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so touching and sweet..showed real emotions hun
    But there is a problem occured there
    'I�m sorry' when you correct this,it would be perfect
    Take care hun
    Your friend
    Laura

  • 11 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was really sweet and beautiful, but ya the only problem was what lauRa said up there, the rest was absolutely gorgeous, 5/5
    luv gabriella

  • 11 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Girl this is VERY GOOD.. Love it keep it up.. And i added a new poem "Revenge" should i enter that one?

  • 11 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    Nice i rally liked this one

  • 11 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Ithe only thing bad i noticed was the annoying things that replace apostrophes on this site, if u want it to be perfect n all... anyway amazing poem,you express how you feel with such clarity and i love the sincerity behind your well penned words.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Uhm I like the way you rhyme some stanza :) this is so sweet I like it! it flowed well! so.. I'll give it a 5/5! :) good job!

    Hey sorry for the late comment by the way

  • 11 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Nice ryhming, i really like it.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    WOW... i really feel this one aye... loss blows, but you get on with life. Im sorry to hear you lost someone dear to you though... good write never the less