Beautiful poeming enjoyed it alot.

WiLd RoSe
Please comment on mine

This, to me, was a really powerful poem. There was so much desire in there. The flow was flawless, your rhyming written so well, but most of all I love your vocab. It always makes a poem so much better and you use it widely, worked very effectively. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

Awh hunny, that's amazing. I love your usage of words, very powerful if I do say so myself and the flow was just outstanding. Never fails. You are an amazing writer.

Wow, beautiful job, your words are so deep
this is my favorite part:
gentle touch on longing skin,

that sent shivers through me

it was absaloutly breathtaking

brittany (MD)

Another wonderful peice. Keep up the awesome work. YOu have a great talent!
God bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

The story you made up was ecellent and so are the description of the people and incidents...I liked it so much
Good job
Take Care
Laura

"Yearning for his gentle touch on longing skin,
Impulses urge her towards her burning desires.
Placing tender lips onto his; warmth bursts within.
Entwining two souls; both lovers hearts, it requires. "

I really like those lines. Alot of emotion in this poem. Your a great writer. well done.
5/5

~Chelsea

Wow for this one, i could feel the emotion through out the poem, and i believe this one is one of your best one........ cause its is just too great.

I love the way you described love in this poem. Very nice, great vocabulary, and fantastic flow. Keep upthe great work!

Hmm, it seems as though someone is falling in love!.. I wonder who the lucky fellow is! He better not hurt my sweet cyber wifey! Beautiful poem hun, your love poems are exceeding mine!

OoOoOo!!! all of your poems are so filled with emotion it's like I'm writing it myself when I read it you give me a clear movie in my head nice job!