Comments : I am NOT a Nobody.

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    I like this one alot, your amazing!! i think although it is a great poem that there are a few rough spots towards the middle, but all is well and a great poem,
    nessa

  • 10 years ago

    by Noir

    Good job, I must say I was a little reluctant on reading your poems because I assumed...Oh no, not another pathetic attempt of garnering attention, by claiming you are nobody...

    But I am amazed, at the structure you put forward and the way you leveled each questioning yourself on whether you're somebody...

    I must say...Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i totaly agree with your message. you truly have confedince on ur self which is great personality. you can do it.

  • 10 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    I enjoyed this, it is very inspirational. It speaks loud and with feeling, a poem too unique to just forget quickly. I like the fifth stanza a lot, especially the Pointless. Abstract, maybe, but not Plain. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    I am very surprised that no one has commented this poem yet! You have done a splendid job at invoking power and grace into the same poem of self-value.

    The last sentence sunk deeply into my mind.
    Overall, a great piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Ahaha... nevermind =] i swear i thought i saw a zero on the comments, but it turns out you have already had six. anyways, great job once again!