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I like this one alot, your amazing!! i think although it is a great poem that there are a few rough spots towards the middle, but all is well and a great poem,
Good job, I must say I was a little reluctant on reading your poems because I assumed...Oh no, not another pathetic attempt of garnering attention, by claiming you are nobody...
But I am amazed, at the structure you put forward and the way you leveled each questioning yourself on whether you're somebody...
I must say...Well done.
by Goran Rahim
Wow, i totaly agree with your message. you truly have confedince on ur self which is great personality. you can do it.
by The Pessimistic Peabody
I enjoyed this, it is very inspirational. It speaks loud and with feeling, a poem too unique to just forget quickly. I like the fifth stanza a lot, especially the Pointless. Abstract, maybe, but not Plain. 5/5
by Avrii Monrielle
I am very surprised that no one has commented this poem yet! You have done a splendid job at invoking power and grace into the same poem of self-value.
The last sentence sunk deeply into my mind.
Overall, a great piece.
Ahaha... nevermind =] i swear i thought i saw a zero on the comments, but it turns out you have already had six. anyways, great job once again!