Comments : Six Months Ago

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The flow was smooth and the rhyming was nice. overall i liked this poem. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Bryan, babe, that was beautiful! I'm glad to see you getting yourself back to regular... Miss ya babe! xx

    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    Great poem. Love seeing the brightness in this piece.

    Now six months later my heart is finally free,
    healed by love and happy memories,
    and for as long as my heart can see,
    I will love you, that is my guarantee.

    Loved this stanza. Excellent!
    Take care your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Great poem and congrats

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Great poem you have here Byran, I found it to be beautiful in its own way.

    Now six months later my heart is finally free,
    healed by love and happy memories,
    and for as long as my heart can see,
    I will love you, that is my guarantee.

    Thats my fav stanza in this poem.

    The whole poem flowed flawlesly.
    Well done 5/5~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, we often go through rough times because of hearts games but then its nice to see that there is a brighter side.
    Great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "distroyed by the pain left inside," (sic) (= Destroyed was mispelled in the line.)

    I'm glad you got over your former love in just six months of pain; mine's 5 years, and probably still ongoing... When you said, "for as long as my heart can see, I will love you, that is my guarantee.", it makes me wonder how lucky this girl must be to have such a wonderful assurance. I envy her. (lol, just kidding.)
    Can you see now how amazing Love can be? :)
    Haha. Keep on writing what you feel and like.
    all the best and take care.
    Love,
    Debbie cakes

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful and expressive piece! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Ah you started that poem feeling sad and ended it with such delight well done i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is good i like the flow good job and thx again for the comments

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    WOW! this is really good!

    "distroyed by love, broken in two,"
    And I feel the same too..

    I love the ending in the poem! good job! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ivy Stockill

    Hi, i absolutely love this poem. I love how it is sad at the start but all chearful at the end, definetely brings a tear to my eyes. well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx

    I really loved the flow for this one. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by mimzy

    Nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Beautiful!
    seriously, i really liked this.
    the flow was flawless and the rhyming was all good, none seemed forced at all!
    and i absolutely love the middle stanza. for me it was the saddest and most descriptive part of the poem.
    great job! 5/5

    ~Sandra

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #5:
    The trial of moving on with life, from whatever it may be holding us back. And it seems only love can get us through those terrible times. And this poem describes a man who truly is a MAN, because many can't let a love in b/c of their pain. I hope that made some sense :), but basically I'm saying...GREAT job! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 16 years ago

    by i less then 3 you

    Great poem lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow...! i like this one.... not too long but very meaningful! im touched and i think it really has a great flow! a bit sad but its romantic..... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jubes

    This is so great I love it!
    Its so encouraging for me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Natasha

    Firstly I would like to say that I enjoyed the rhyme and flow in this piece. It makes for a nice read.
    Second, I think it is brilliant how you used the two emotions of happy and sad and make the transition between them smooth.
    yet again you wrote a very nice poem!

    thanks,
    ~* Natasha *~