Comments : Names

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    That is funny because it's just so random! lol. I would have never thought about something like that to write. You got all of them rhyming too, well done. It actually had a good flow too. =]

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was different and definitely made me smile. I needed something unique.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Mmm ... very interesting. I cannot say that I have ever read a poem like this. I like the creativity that your mind has David.

    --Sher

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A creative job, and dont forget Goran is Gore, lollllllllllllllllll
    nice job so different

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Hahahaha, i saw my name in it, tnx
    u r great.............

  • 10 years ago

    by June

    A witty little piece ,I like the fact my name can be shortened to anything else lol although my dear mother often call me Juney.You even had two of boys names in there ,I hate that Andrew gets called Andy ,but am relieved that my James is not Jim ,far from it we call him Jay.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very cute :0) Brought a smile to my night. Good job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    A really unique poem David. it was a great poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Delicious 42

    That is so cute...how did you come up with something like that? well done

    Bethany

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah Overpeck

    This is really cute

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cute little play on names.....like it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, i thought it was ineresting but had a very good flow, nice work 5/5.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Unique

  • 10 years ago

    by Miko

    Unique and cute =) 5/5 David!

  • 10 years ago

    by Miko

    Unique and cute =) 5/5 David!

  • 10 years ago

    by Miko

    Unique and cute =) 5/5 David!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelsie

    This made me smile, very cute.

  • 10 years ago

    by minnie4cheese

    Lol without even reading your profile i knew u were aussie; really well written DAVO

  • 10 years ago

    by candace

    That was so random but i thought it was cute;)

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    That was absolutely a random work. =]]