''Oh i love him so much! He's so hot!" Get a clue.. for the love of God, get a clue''

AHAHAHA
Oh that made me giggle.
I can defintely relate there.

I enjoyed this poem, I found it thought provoking, and found every word to be true.
Let's hope that the kids can tak note haha

Haha. completely agree with you. Being a teenager and all its pretty pathetic watching relationships begin, blossom over about an average of 2 days and then finally crash and burn. Most people my age are too immature to know the real meaning of love.

Great poem
:]

All the best,
Bonnie
x

Gem
I love this :) Your words ring so true.

They all say that their in love
Right from the very start
But they can't be cos true love lasts
When it comes deep from the heart

It does come deep from the heart.
Take Care Love Cindy

So true,love is more of word than feeling for so many young couples, a very strong message through words you have given .Wonderful write dear.

Take care
chavii.

A testament to young love. I remember it well.
I really enjoy reading your work.

Man I'm going to let my friend her this. He has been dating a girl for 2 days and says he loves her. I told him it's no way but doesn't believe me. Great job on this poem. 5/5
-vino

I agree with everything this poem stands for! You hit it right on the spot, just because you have strong feelings for someone doesn't mean it's love!
5/5
xoxo-amber

Lmao Gem. =] To me, that has got to be one of your best poems ever.
And the sad thing is, all of what you said is true. The flow was flawless, I loved the humor within the poem and the truth, and the word usage was great. Fantastic write, keep it up! 5/5

"(Just getting a bit tired of all the kiddie-winks saying, "Oh i love him so much! He's so hot!" Get a clue.. for the love of God, get a clue!!)"

^ Oh dear, when I read that I busted out laughing. My mother looked at me like I was crazy. =]

Stephanie Lynn .+.

That was great and dead on. I've been reading too many of those poems and its a bit ridiculous. True love comes from deep within and yet it can be just as painful.
Marvelous. I loved it.

Oh deart Gem someone ones a bit snappy :)
I know what you mean but you have to remember love is only valued after years of failed relationship then do you trully realise what you have and what is worth fighting for :) the young kiddies have no idea as they dont know what love is :) i love the poem and you're right ;) 99/5

Omg, you had me cracking up by your footnote! Haha. Nice one, Gem. =)

I know what you're trying to say, but this is how reality is at the present moment. It seems like people nowadays are taking love for granted in order to satisfy their own selfish pleasures. I know, we cannot change a person's heart and mind; but perhaps we can make a difference by making them REALIZE this flaw through this wonderful piece.
Kudos' :D
Love,
Debbie

Definitely true...you have a way with making the truth flow, girl, good job!

~~but i dont care what you say...I do love him. His name is Marcus, for crying out loud (and yes, Gem, you do agree with me...remind me to send you a pic)

~~Rikki, aka SSS~~