This poem is excellent it is really good for the kids keep up the good work

Hey this poem was excellent. it was flawless. to an extent. your only 14 and you can write like this? you have some pretty special talent.

5/5 David

Soooo cute!
I love poems like this, when the tone is happy and the flow is flawless.
Excellent little piece =)
5/5
*Gem*

Wow great poem!!!

I have never read a christmas poem and I truly loved yours! Great job, and you have succeeded in making me smile today. Your ryhming was good as well, so I just would like to say, 5/5!

Hatori
Thanks for the R/R/C's on my poems!

Haha, aweh! Cute. It made me smile haha, I really liked the way that you ended the poem, it really brought it all together. =)

5.5

This was a great poem. Very nicely written.

It's sweet.
thanks for commenting mine.
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5/5 excellent poem. its so cute. it really camptures the moment of Christmas. im glad i read it. :)

Aw so cute! I wanted to write a poem about Christmas, but I just couldn't figure out what to say.....You did though! Bravo! I think I'm best at writing sad poems hahaha.

I love it! You should rite one on Wallace and gromet lol. This was sooo cute!