I like the message in this one....life always has surprises in store... sadness along with the happiness....makes us appreciate the good times all the more.

"Tell me why your commitin suicide,
why you throwing your life away."

suicide a very touchy subject... a permanent solution to a temporary problem....I like the ending line....very well done!

A solid message that many need to hear. Suicide is permanent and yet those behind are always left asking "why" while in so much pain.

Continue spreading the word for everyone not to give up on life.

--Sher

Wow! Yes I like that lots..
It's so awesome!!..
I think this one flows good!
good job!

Wow that was a great poem. Love the message its giving, I think everyone should read this, suicidal or not. Keep it up!!!

A wonderful poem that many need to read.
The flow was good, emotions were strong, and your word usage was good.

"Tell me why your commitin suicide,
why you throwing your life away."

^ Wonderful lines & a fantastic right altogether for such a tough subject. =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I like this piece, it is worthy of note. I aver that this will make a wonderful eye-opener to the populace who are in this negative condition.
Nice poem nonetheless. Kudos' to you. :)
Debbie

Yes fight. wat a great message. don't give in, fight. well done again. you have some awesome talent.

5/5 David

Thanks, and i think this a good poem shows alot of emotion.

Wow this is fight peom. this is good one to help other person who don't knw how to fight for her/his life. good job.

This one shows a lot of heart, Doind Good Homie

Awsome and i tried to kill myself im not gonna lie but my true love came along and kept me from doing it and im holding on as hard as i can , my best friend and my boy friend 2 things i'd do anything in the world for and you know if you were in the people who trys to do that stuff's shoes then you would understand yeah we're letting people down and giving them pain and trust me i've lost 2 best friends from that already and its not fun to lose someone to that but when they cant take the pain they just cant take it ............. im keeping strong for two of the best people in the world and * trying * to live the life my mom couldn't

~ ashley ~

I don't quite get it can you elaborate?

I wud luv to see u answering my question in "Discussions" after reading it

Omg this is amazing!!!!

Wow that is really good... 5/5 i liked that one:)...

This is reallllly good.
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This one is really good and my friend wanted to kill herself to, so i kind of know how you felt. but good job

Aw i liked this. it was inspiring.

thanks for the comment on my poems. nice job 5/5.

I really like this one because I can relate to it a lot. Nice!

I thoughh this was pretty good