Awsome poem! It made me smile =)

Hi rose, thanks for your comments,means a lot
keep up the good work, i really love this one 5/5 ,,,,,,,,,,thanks again,,,,,,,,tracy

I'm rather entralled by your concluding lines. For instance, this one's concluding line. I thought this piece was written as a release from your raw emotions, and I see that this has potential to improve. But, then again, this was an enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing.
all the best and take care,
Debbie

Nice poem :) 5/5! and thanks for the comment :)

A beautifully written poem.
Take care x