Gidson [Acrostic]

by Debbie   Apr 15, 2007


God has given me a time to be with you
In my heart, I could just feel the happiness
Didn't you know you had washed my sadness?
So long, the truth still hides beyond the blue
Over the sun, as it sets. As the colours fade
Not a thing will change; I will always love you...

© Copyright 2006 by Debbie de Lara

Acrostic is a poetry form in which the first letter in each line forms a word or a name.

*written 1 year ago

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  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Wow, now I realise I still have to learn how to write a good acrostic.. lol.. XD Yours is so good, so adorable. I can really understand your feelings =) Hihi. Keep up the good work!

    <3
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    To be honest, this is not one of the best I've read from you. I like the choice of words, but the poem is a little emotionless.
    I'll give you 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh my.. You're good at writing Acrostic poems :| The ending was perfect.. Flow was flawless throughout the poem.. Fantastic work.. - as always ^_^

    5/5! all the way!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Oh I think its soo sweet and very touching. Made my heart flutter : ] Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wow! touching.. can relate to this alot
    once again 5/5 well done
    .x

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