Comments : Gidson [Acrostic]

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I know ive read this poem before and i found it to be really beautifully written. Really heartfelt and enjoyable to read. Well done on this. A great poem =) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    This is a wonderful piece of poetry. I really love the imagery you've used, and you have strong adjectives. Keep up the great work, please. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    I loved your formed poems. Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is short and sweet but still from the heart with very much emotion. It's so difficult to stop loving somebody that you truly loved once, if your over them in a short period of time - it was never love at all. amazing job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well written as always, this was no exception, th flow was great, the emtion deep ,and word choice awesome.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lovely work....wonderful acrostic..it did'nt seem forced at all...n oall over it flowed well too....short n sweet write=)
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really nice poem. You are one of the lucky ones who have found someone who you love and loves you. Never take that for granted. Great poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Aww soo sweet and soo true.. it reminded me ofm y first kiss.. ahh lol I loved your choices of words and .. honestly there isn't anything that I would change about this poem.. it good, perfect .. thats my opinion.. good job and keep up with the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    Once again.. good. who is gidson or what does that stand for... if you do not mind me asking?

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Good poem..
    Nice acrostic..^^.
    It's nice to meet someone who take and return your love ..

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This poem does seem like yours, I have to say.

    It's too... normal.
    I miss your befuddling words that made me want to memmorize the dictionary.

    But is it me, or was this the first time you ever mentioned something about God in your poem?

    So long, the truth still hides beyond the blue
    Very mysterious.

    But I have to admit.
    Even if it didn't feel as though it was your best.
    It was still pretty darned good.

    I love this structure.
    I never used to until I met some people who could create a heck of a great acrostic.

    All in all, dear.
    This is a 4 in my eyes.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    Great poem. beautiful. i loved it.!! 5/5

    `-jackie.

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was Beautiful. I find myself drifting to your poetry on and off and just rereading some of them. I think your an really good writer and like i have said before you have a very high vocab. I also have said before but not sure if i have said it to you but i love acostic. I have yet to try and write one for myself. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Well, you know what I'm going to say; so is there any point in saying?!?! Haha. Although I'm not a big fan of the words 'sadness' and 'happiness' in most poetry, you pulled it off with your impressive and intriguing rhythm. Well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Soooo sweet this is a great write i loved it a lot its an amazing thing to feel true love

  • 16 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wat does Gidson mean? but i think this should b in lfie but watever..i luved this poem..idk y but i almost cried..i think this is one of those poems tht is so good and luvin tht it makes me wnt to cry(im serious 2!!) a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Wow! touching.. can relate to this alot
    once again 5/5 well done
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Oh I think its soo sweet and very touching. Made my heart flutter : ] Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh my.. You're good at writing Acrostic poems :| The ending was perfect.. Flow was flawless throughout the poem.. Fantastic work.. - as always ^_^

    5/5! all the way!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    To be honest, this is not one of the best I've read from you. I like the choice of words, but the poem is a little emotionless.
    I'll give you 4/5