This is a very nice poem. Extremely heartfelt and emotional. You almost made me cry... I like how you compare people's voices to music. "Listen in his heartbeat, hear its symphony.
"The rhythm in his soul wasn't even of me."" Great job with this poem.

Wow even the first poems you wrote are amazing lol wow good job!! you are an amazing writer. i think your gonna make it big one day lol dont forget us little people btw lol good job and thx for the comment

keenan

Omg!!!! i was in tears as it is reading this poem, beacuase i recently went though this... but then at the end of the poem when you said her name was jennifer!?!? omg!!!... thats the name of the girl who mine liked/likes... i can really realate to this poem and its story, and the feeling of it... and then her name!! lol, i almost crapped myself when i saw it :P
but its also very well written, and a nice flow to it
<3ang

Great poem amazingly written and very heartfelt write, full of sad emotions, the word choice was very nice , you did a wonderful job on this piece, keep it up, your friend Tracy d.............5/5