This poem is very beautiful. Keep up the Great Work!!

This is a very good poem david, nice flow, i know how you feel man ive been there too, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up david!!!!

Awesome poem it was sweet keep up the awesome job

Nice poem, you must really love her. It shows in your words, which is a great treait because if you can portray your feelings through words, and actually move someone, you can do anything.

This is a great poem. you put thought into, and made it original. nice job.

Awesome poem! Great rhyme and flow and 100% from the heart. It was amazing with a great beginning. Some good lines you got!
Charisma*

If only the world created more guyz like u !
=] i lve it .. shows how muc hu caree .. dont eva let go of her ..
5/5